Indirection in Newspaper Stories

“Newspaper writers and editors like to pack as much information into a sentence as possible. But packing extraneous information into a sentence, just to ac

“Newspaper writers and editors like to pack as much information into a sentence as possible. But packing extraneous information into a sentence, just to achieve a knowing tone, reduces clarity and can drive readers away. [Here’s] how to spot problem sentences and what to do about them.”


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Date:
November 23, 2016
Author:
XPLANE